Critique me!
I made a poster for Betty's last show in Ocean City. Gonna be about 3x4 feet, laminated on foamcore board. I'll need to have katertot reshoot the photo so it's not stuck in a parking lot but the idea is there (hence the "FPO" = For Placement Only). Comments?
Also, if anyone is out there wants some publicity towards a bunch of VW gearheads at the show, I'd just love you to pieces if you bought me some coilovers for the car. My "sponsor" finally gave me her "deal" and I promptly told her to "eat my ass". $50 bucks off of $800 coils and having me do all of the work I was going to do just isn't prudent. So yeah! Hook us up!
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Also, if anyone is out there wants some publicity towards a bunch of VW gearheads at the show, I'd just love you to pieces if you bought me some coilovers for the car. My "sponsor" finally gave me her "deal" and I promptly told her to "eat my ass". $50 bucks off of $800 coils and having me do all of the work I was going to do just isn't prudent. So yeah! Hook us up!
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- Friday, August 18, 2006 at 1:43 PM
- Posted by JKREW
- 6 Comments
Overall, good.
What the hell is the red 'EPO' over the image... maybe I'm not a cool enough car guy... but its confusing.
It's FPO. It means For Placement Only. That means it may not be the final image but he's using it as a placeholder.
I'M SO SMART!
(jkrew had to tell me too)
hey, you live on a golf course, the 4th green... improvise! POOF, no more parking lots and houses in the backgroud... hell, run over cheating golfer for me while youre at it!
…I totally don't wanna be a doucherocket here, but wouldn't it be "Notes of Interest" or "Points of Interest" instead of "Interests of Note"?
OK, I'll be over here shutting the hell up now.
what rob said. and maybe instead of thanks/sponsors it can be "thanks to our sponsors"
I've already told you this but I like the old tone to it, good old feel. great start! now let's get to reshooting!
Nice. You might change it to: Sponsor Support, then list VW, etc.